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Hello, Eli I really like the way you talk about the burma trail and describe it and I think that you worked hard on your writing, also you still tried your best to spell words even if you were unsure how its spell, but there's always something we need to work and I think you need to work on the background because it's a bit hard to read the words cause the backgrounds are a bit to bright of a color I think you could use a color that's more pastel like a baby blue colour so i'm not focused on the background. Thanks for reading yours sincerely, Olivia
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Hello, Eli
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you talk about the burma trail and describe it and I think that you worked hard on your writing, also you still tried your best to spell words even if you were unsure how its spell, but there's always something we need to work and I think you need to work on the background because it's a bit hard to read the words cause the backgrounds are a bit to bright of a color I think you could use a color that's more pastel like a baby blue colour so i'm not focused on the background.
Thanks for reading
yours sincerely, Olivia
thanks for that my background was a little too bright that you could not read Properly.
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